Emma couldn’t sleep that night. She woke up several times, sweaty and afraid. She looked at the clock and then out of the window. It was 00:02 and raining. She sat up in bed and tried to think of who would want to hurt her. After a couple of minutes she was determined that it was someone she didn’t know. She fell back asleep and the next day she stayed at home, afraid that this someone would wait for her outside of her house or at school. She told her parents about it and they took it very seriously. That afternoon they called the principle and told her about the messages Emma had received that month.
A few days later it was settled that Emma was going to start on a new school. Emma never returned to her old school, nor did she talk to any of her old friends. All of this just because Billy in her class had been pranking her since April’s Fools Day. Billy was Simon’s best friend.
You described everything very good, like that it was raining and that she woke up, sweaty and afraid. The words that you used were good, not to simple or to hard. It was a great story, with a good and interesting beginning, and then the finishing end, which explained everything. What happened then? Did Billy stop sending her texts or did he apologize? I liked the end, it was kind of funny (:
SvaraRadera